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Oh that's fun, where she's from? I know a Pavetta (mother of Ciri) from Witcher but that's clearly a different character.

snowyFeline responds:

she's from my brain!

Badass!

Neon colors really fit with the style of the original anime. Really well captures the entire feeling of the thing you're adapting in one drawing.

Lines are good, but you definitely need to work on your shading man. Everything looks like if it was made of smooth sheets of rubber - no texture, no diversity in values or shine, and worst - I have no idea where light is supposed to come from. From the front, as it seems on the gun and the arm (but not on magazine)? Angled from the right, as the hand holding MP5k isn't shadowed by the body? All I know is, design-wise it looks cool, pose is good, bit tones are a trainwreck. (Also, this grip would look slightly more comfortable if you didn't nix stock on that G36 - it'd serve as some counterbalance. But that's just nitpicking.)

Oh gosh. Reading it again I just realised how much foreshadowing I missed. Welp, gotta read everything again from the start.

Anatomy problems:
- Eyes don't seem to be on the same level (her right eye is higher than other one)
- Her torso/shoulders look disjointed from the head
- Shoulders/back perspective is weird (her left shoulder would be visually closer to right one and her back would be barely visible in this position)
- You didn't account for height of the neck, which increases above feeling.
What is good though is style (feels nice and "noir"), design is okay, handgun is properly detailed.

Whoa.

Anatomy is seriously screwed. This, or hell uses some non-euclidan perspective.
Terribly visible around butt and legs (compared to rest of body) and - oh my God, the arms...
Take a figure drawing class, honestly. Or get a book on it. Or whatever.
No offence meant.

haehyun responds:

Non-euclidean* art is a type of style primarily used in abstract pieces with geometric shapes and a mathematic approach.
I'd love to claim I attempted such a complex style but it would simply be against my morals.
...also I never tried to incorporate straight forward shapes using equations to define very precise spaces on my picture plane.

Oh welllllzzzz

No offense* .

OHMYDEARGOD

Don't save pixel art in JPG. NEVER.
THIS IS WHAT .PNG FORMAT IS FOR.
Also, needs more shading - so far only helmet is shaded, rest is completely flat.

darkhydra1 responds:

thanks for the tip !

Generic.

Does it scream "Pinkie Pie"? No.
Does it scream anything, actually?
Anyone could wield it, and plastering it with cupcake texture doesn't change that.
It's terribly generic and bland, and could be transplanted into any other "cute" design.
There were lot of things: gun could visually resemble a cupcake, for starter.
Sorry, nothing special to see here.

Alright...

This is not too bad, but something seems missing, but I can't pinpoint it. It's something with the compostition? Dunno...

EnactJudo responds:

I wasn't really sure either, that's why I scrapped it and tossed it in the art portal

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